My song i made up from bloodkane no lie so please read it out of 10

[Bloodkanekiller]

Im rapping but i cant get the hang of this i cant get in my head
stuff is going all away ill feel like im dead
all over the floor dead bodies i see
but i tell you one thing you wouldnt wanna be me
i try and take it all away
but i cant get it out
my brain is going to explode
and im running all about
but ill tell you one thing you never get listen to this song or youll regret

Somethings happen all on my away someones dieing each day but i cant pretect them i cant know more im going down drain i feel rore but im trying and ill try to be who i am and that is the rapper i am but a rapper that i am aint someone you like on t.v its someone in your hert and someone who you love its not just greatness its skill.


Im still cant get it out im going to die i heard that the doctor said ill die theres a 80% chance ill die tonight but they never know ill try to live and be with god as long as you ever know people dont treat me as someone famous they treat me as a friend you should too and then it wont be my end.

[Bloodkanekiller]

eney rates plz
sorry
for double
posts
rates

Edited by Corey777 (Forum Moderator): Please don’t double post, simply edit your previous post.

[Luayminator]

Notice how no one cares?
Please stop

[Painiac]

Sorry, but for the love of literature and all things English... please stop.... It's getting to my last nerve... if people don't post, it is cos they don't want to.