A bloodkane blade trinity poem read here this one is good

[Bloodkanekiller]

Blade is somewhere in the dark
to kill the enimens vampires and other stuff
killing them and doing his best
chopping them in half and then deal with the rest
bleeding from down his head
his glasses cracking near his head
takeing of his big dark cloak
killing the vampires
on his own
weapons he will find
and knows he will kill them in his mind
enimeis will always be killed
blade trinity is the film
the movie star triple h
dead by half past 8
seen the film
watch it now
blade is out there on the kill
the war will never be over
his enimies will be neither
but blade is the person youll be scared
its a kill he will do
2 friends he has made
blood involved thats how its made

Edited by Butcher11 (Forum Moderator)- Thread closed as the starter has been banned.

[_Olam_]

The word 'bad' springs to mind, followed closely by the phrase:
"Sometimes it's not worth trying..."

In order to improve this poem I think you should erase it all, realise that vampires would beat the HELL out of you, and forget about mispelling 'Eminem'.

Thank you.

[Smiddy]

Yet Another Pointless Thread When will you stop? Tis really starting to get annoying ya know

[_Olam_]

Yet Another Pointless Thread When will you stop? Tis really starting to get annoying ya know

The point of the thread is the poem. It is sort of right in front of you dude.

I know it's a bad poem but still, you have to humour the guy.

[Bloodkanekiller]

Smiddy ur starting to get on my nerves why dont u shut ur face
and dont post if u going to controdict my poem so keep it shut u got it dont come here saying when will u stop some people like it
so shut it
and get
out
of this thread got it.

Edited by Jacko2kn3: Please do NOT be nasty and unrespectful of other members or Habbox Staff

[_Olam_]

Smiddy ur starting to get on my nerves why dont u shut ur face
and dont post if u going to controdict my poem so keep it shut u got it dont come here saying when will u stop some people like it
so shut it
and get
out
of this thread got it.

We'll post here regardless of whether we contradict or concede with your poem, kid. Please direct us to the people who 'like' it - I could do with a laugh.

[Smiddy]

We'll post here regardless of whether we contradict or concede with your poem, kid. Please direct us to the people who 'like' it - I could do with a laugh.

Thank You :p
Blood Dnt Try to threaten me Mate It doesn't work

[Surname]

Well, this is a nice situation you've got yourselves in.

[Michael.]

Blade is somewhere in the dark
to kill the enimens vampires and other stuff
killing them and doing his best
chopping them in half and then deal with the rest
bleeding from down his head
his glasses cracking near his head
takeing of his big dark cloak
killing the vampires
on his own
weapons he will find
and knows he will kill them in his mind
enimeis will always be killed
blade trinity is the film
the movie star triple h
dead by half past 8
seen the film
watch it now
blade is out there on the kill
the war will never be over
his enimies will be neither
but blade is the person youll be scared
its a kill he will do
2 friends he has made
blood involved thats how its made

[Convictions]

Thank You :p
Blood Dnt Try to threaten me Mate It doesn't work

I'd watch it, he'll wrestle you to death.

[Ontopic] That poem would be better if it had more clear definations between lines and verses, as it stands, its an errm good idea but there is no punctuation or thought in the layout [/Ontopic]