[First Official Alt] Habbo Garage

[Amir]

(Credit to Lol for the tutorial linked in his/her signature ~ works well)

I created this from a tutorial I found, although I kept roof all the way through as I couyldn't be bothered to change it

Works well I hope? Please be kind, it's my first official alt. First one which wen't OK.


EDIT: I think lower right corner is a bit dodgey.. sorry.

[Nemo]

its the best first alt i've ever seen!!!! +rep first lol and ermmm try adding more detail and the lines on the garage should be lighter, but ermmm also show me in conparison(sp?) to a actual habbo coz im lazy and then i shall rate wen it rocks my socks ;D so yeah... +rep

[ItsDave]

Heres some help. Some of it confuses me, the way you've styled it.

[lolligeboy]

DO NOT use thick lines
DO NOT use weird glass things on the glass
DO continue working on alts, and become bether and bether and bether :p

BTW, the tutorial in my guide had some inportant other things you did not use, the light lines...:

That.. zoom in and you will see...


However very nice for your first, I do not see any errors exept the one Xzoid showed you... Tnx for using my guide :p

[@xP]

its gd for a first alt

[nobility]

It looks good, apart from the pointed out errors, and I think the shadow would have looked better facing the opposite way. Nice try.

[Amir]

Updated edition...



I took in the comments you all made (I hope) It does look better now.. please keep commenting! First time i've done something right...

I could not sort out the corner which was mentioned as a pixelerror. I am aware of it.. I always was, I just can't fix it.
+Rep to first person who can fix it for me! Thanks!

[Joker]

Its a great alt, but as you said its your first official (i think youve probably done more) 7/10

[Amir]

Is that a compliment or an insult?

Please note..

I used lolligeboy's tutorials. Click this link to see them :

http://habboxforum.com/showthread.ph...51#post2864351

(Plus rep for Lol if I can.. good tutorials and advice)

EDIT: Got to spread, sorry.

[Amir]

Ah.. urrr...

Well, it's for v9 sized habbos. As I did not consider the average Habbo height...

(Apologies for the HC badge, got the Habbo image off GoogleImages)