Here it is out of 10, improvements, and rep if ya kind.![]()

Here it is out of 10, improvements, and rep if ya kind.![]()
loads of errors m8 5/10 - sorry
Try and take care and use black to outline the main stuff like the hair is done.
Needs shading and get rid of the extra background to the right.
Nice try for your first tho![]()
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Thnx anyway. Atleast someones onist. I like onist people. Ill try to do those improvements.
Ummm...Title Is "MY FIRST EVER HABBO GIRL ALTERATION" Not The First Ever It's His First EverOriginally Posted by Jamie
There are loads of girl alts ;/And I Looks Kind Of Bad And Needs Lots Of Improving Lol 4/10 At Mo :p
Nice tryShe has cool hair but i think you need to outline the clothes and add a bit of shading. 7/10
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Yo.
Ok i knwo this sounds dumb, but how do you shade ?
Ok, I'm Not Sure Who It Was But Someone Gave Me Grey Rep Saying I'm Harsh, I Was Sticking Up For Him Whoever That Was.
grey rep is an green one but as they had less rep... it comez as grey
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