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Ya guys i was bored so i made this poem. Tell me if you like it.

Habbos all throughout the land
wait for the rollers to appear in their hand,

Weve heard about them from habbox
From Sierk and his typed Pixel Specks.


Everyones excited, habbos better than before
As we swim in the pool on the highest floor,

Summers coming, Parasols blocking the suns path
that burns our skin releasing its wrath,

But sitting safely inside the Lobby
As I play habbo, my favorite hobby.

On habbox we find the rares that we need
The habbos elected it the best fansite to read,

The competitions on habbox give us things to do
as we sit and wait for our friends to join me and you,

So come to habbox its where everythings at
Where you come to sell things, sit, and chat.

[Randy-ortonrko]

Hmmmm
doesnt need to rhyme
i like it
funny
8/10
bit stuff like habbos elected its like winning really
could of made it abit better but thats good still
mr bloodkanekiller 2