A song I wrote. (still needs alot of work).

Browney · 21-02-2007, 05:10 PM

Originally Posted by Jake,

I'd rather not.

LMAOO.

**Sly** · 21-02-2007, 05:18 PM

Originally Posted by Midget

Quite Cool, Sung version soon?

Sorry, I don't sing ;[

YoManGo! · 21-02-2007, 06:22 PM

Pretty nice. You're a better writer than me, most my songs being about ponies and vegetables.

Browney · 21-02-2007, 06:26 PM

Originally Posted by Jake,

Sorry, I don't sing ;[

Shame really. I would like to hear someone attempt it.

**Misawa** · 21-02-2007, 06:29 PM

Not bad, but some of the lines seem overly elongated compared to the others so it kind of looks 'unsingable'.

uh huh her · 21-02-2007, 11:08 PM

i like it, i'm writing a few songs atm aha. hopefully they'll be as good as yours.

OMGitsaROSS · 21-02-2007, 11:12 PM

Originally Posted by Vodata2

sounds good, although u should make it habbo related

Sadact :rolleyes:

OT: Nice song mate

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