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    thanks
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    It's too square. Like the river bank. Surely where the water meats the land would waver. But keep working on it.

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    I it
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    Quote Originally Posted by Optimizer View Post
    here it is im really really happy with it. its turned out better than i thought it would. i only need to add something to the top middle ish to make it fully complete and then ill think about putting a train on. i tried to make the background as simple as possable. i did not make the trees i googled for those so i hope you enjoy it. rate of /10 and c&c please thanks

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    It is very square and lacks texture.
    The blocks just seem to end at the ground, surely they should be built into the ground or have a base?
    Also, the supports should go beneath the water, not stop at the surface.
    The wooden sleepers need a highlight.
    There are also many pixel errors and faults.

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    point out the pixel errors please
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    I can only see one pixel error,
    The leaf on the top of the tree on the left it kinda, out side of the lines.
    Other than thet I think it;s fab =D
    How about putting some shadow under the trees?

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    It's very very blocky.

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    ill try and add shadow to trees and try and make the reflection in the water
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    Quote Originally Posted by Optimizer View Post
    point out the pixel errors please
    Two unwanted black pixels on the highlight of the metal rails.

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    Really good.
    can't see any imperfections.
    That really does deserve some rep
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