Hey this is one of my poems iv written for gcse english. I write poems about my life and how i feel. This is um about an ex boyfriend.
With my eyes i could see,
Deep into his own.
Two shining gemstones glistening in the sun.
With my nose i could smell,
That famillier smell.
A mix of Joop and stale cigerette smoke.
With my lips i could taste,
The sweetness of his own.
With every kiss i worked to so hard to earn.
With my ears i could hear,
A heart felt whisper.
Three little words ive learnt to hate.
With my entire being i could feel,
Every punch he threw.
Why do the ones you love hurt you the most?
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13-05-2005, 05:28 PM #1
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That is so cuet!
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13-05-2005, 06:03 PM #3
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Pssst Jamie it aint sposed to be cute
Ty 4 rep anyway hunny1
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He's protected from 3 inch bees, that's right. He's protected from 3 inch bees, tonight! A 3 inch bee can't sting this guy! A 3 inch bee shouldn't even try! He's protected from 3 inch bees, that's right!
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13-05-2005, 06:21 PM #5
+rep Nice Poem
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13-05-2005, 08:39 PM #6
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Thanku guys -Big hugg- I love everyone today!!
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13-05-2005, 09:02 PM #8
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-Bites- KAI!
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Good poem
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