1st layout [ please rate]

[LondonGoons]

Hey its my first layout so please rate, also be honest.
Don't say its crap and leave it explain why, and how i can improve.

Thanks, be honest.

So its my first layout i haven't looked at any sites or nothing.



Thanks +rep

[Liberation]

Um. Well first, i would add more colours, graphics and a nicer font. As to be honest, its just a few coloured boxes with text on?

Nice try though.

[LondonGoons]

yeah i was testing some colours to put, but adam said i need to look at colourlovers lol.

im doing that now, thanks+rep.

also could you recommend me a font, and what sort of graphics.

Also note im using fireworks not photoshop

[Amplified]

Well well well, looks like someone is criticizing you now.
You say my layout sucks look at yours its like a white box.. ;l

[beau03]

Mabye add some more things, alot more things.
Also make it most graphic kinda thing.
I can't rate it! To hard for so little, there is nothing there!

[Mr.OSH]

Add more visual style to it.

[Invent]

Ditto. Just text and a box atm.

[LondonGoons]

Thanks, beau03 and opensource, +rep both.
- rep Amplified, due to talking about you when its my thread.

Yeah i posted it just like that so you can give me ideas on what to put on the layout, it is still unfinished i never posted it finished.

Invent, instead of copying other peoples posts, and putting it in your own words, you could tell me some ideas.. thanks.

[Blob]

Thanks, beau03 and opensource, +rep both.
- rep Amplified, due to talking about you when its my thread.

Yeah i posted it just like that so you can give me ideas on what to put on the layout, it is still unfinished i never posted it finished.

Invent, instead of copying others posts.. and puting it on words, can you give me some ideas, thanks, +rep

WOW SOMEONE CANT TAKE CC!

[LondonGoons]

No, i can take CC, but his just being an idiot.

I like honest CC makes me stronger into making better layouts ;]