Habbo Fiction - Ends 28th March

[Moozo]

Habbo name: moozo4
Habbox name: are you to lazy to look up a bit?

Entry:

After all my searching I finally found the hidden Crib. It had been in the Hallway all this time, I reached around to open the door...
and there was Callie, tied up in the corner, shivering and muttering to herself under her breath.
"At last, now we know why you have been appearing as banned all this time. You have been it here, for almost 6 months now. They must have locked you in here during the protests." I said.
"Mhhmm", she said, as though she had forgotten how to speak "please untie me, these ropes are digging into me! And I promise Ill do no more crappy events! Honest!"
"Alas, Callie, I cannot trust you on that. All your previous events have been rubbish, and I cannot unleash you onto the hotel as I do not believe you know what a good event is like." was the reply I gave, as I shut the door and locked it once again, leaving Callie to rot in the hidden crib forever. Who knows, her bones might still be there today...



Tyvm *bows*

[Colleen]

Habbo Name: xconfusedluvx
Habbox Name: Colleen
My Entry:
After all my searching I finally found the hidden Crib. It had been in the Hallway all this time, I reached around to open the door... when the door popped off its hinges... When I gazed inside the crib, I noticed that there was an empty bottle leaking spoiled milk, beside it was a note, written in my missing habbo infants handwriting on a purple stickie... it read:
Dear Mother,

You seemed to have forgotten to feed me and change me
these last few days, during all my screaming and whining
(that you allegedly failed to hear) I seemed to have devloped an unbearable rash and and a filled diaper,
I am leaving you now, as I have found someone who truely loves me...
Sincerely,
The son that was yours,
Inglebert


p.s just so you know, I have legally changed my name so even if you wanted to, you wont be able to find me.

Just when i thought the situation was bad enough, my husband ran through the front door of the hotel lobby after being on a business trip and hearing about Inglebert's disappearance... He clenched me in his manly habbo arms and softly kisses me on my bright peach habbo cheek... After telling him what had happened, and showing him Inglebert's letter he broke down crying, as for me.... I was secretly glad to have gotten rid of that little pest that once was named Inglebert.

The End.

[x-ItsOnlyMeh-x]

"After all my searching I finally found the hidden Crib. It had been in the Hallway all this time, I reached around to open the door... suddenly it creaked open and the sound echoing down the cold, dark and damp corridor ahead. faint foosteps were heard while i was walking, i shot around, the clamey sweat dripping down my forehead.. though i soon realised they were my foosteps. As i walked further and further down the corridor i noticed it started getting smaller, the windows slanted inwards and my back arched slightly. My first instinct was to run back, but as i turned.. my curiosity got the best of me. A small red door.. a shiny gleaming red handle, waiting to be turned... this would be a perfect moment to fool them! he thought.....


to be continued.....:eusa_clap

[cli62]

"After all my searching I finally found the hidden Crib. It had been in the Hallway all this time, I reached around to open the door... the door sounded as though it hadn't been open for a long time. The place gave me shivers down my spine. I took a deep breath as what behind it came into view. Just as I had thought, the hidden Crib was there. Right smack bang in the middle of the dark and gloomy hallway. I could tell that daylight had never made it into that area, as the ground felt dirty and dusty. Slowing approaching the Crib, I hoped that the sack of credits was in there. The rumours that spread around had brought me this far. I couldn't turn back now. Suddenly a cold breeze swept past me and the Crib began to shake furiously. Without a sign, the blankets from the Crib flew out and green slimy tentacle like hands stretched out from it. I screamed till my throat was sore. What mess had I gotten myself into? Were the rumours fake? Did they actually see me eavesdropping on them and decided to make stuff up? The tentacles started oozing. Yellow gunk poured out of the Crib. There was no sign of a sack of credits in there. There was no point in giving up. I forced my legs towards the Crib and looked down. And what I saw, was a green body that looked exactly like.. ME. Before I knew it, my hands were melting into dust.. and slowly the creature gained the colour of a human. It was draining all it could from the last of me.

[Hett]

Habbo Name: MBond
Habbox Name: Hett

After all my searching I finally found the hidden Crib. It had been in the Hallway all this time, I reached around to open the door. I twisted the large handle cautiously, finally I managed to push the huge door open as the thin hinges moaned under the door's weight.

The room was dark, it had a dusty stone floor and the walls were masked in thick silver cobwebs. In the far corner where a spiral of stone steps.
The deaferning silence echoed around the cold room. I finally began to wander towards the staircase, I gazed up at the huge ceiling, it looked as if it had once been a masterpirce, of vibrant coulors, but now the paint had flaked off leaving patches black scars.

I looked into the empty darkness where the steps lead. I gulped nervously and headed down.

At the bottom a small light cut threw the dark. Someone was here before me. A large man with a long brown beard and an un buttoned white shirt was holding a flaming torch above his scruffy hair.

'Dave', I muttered under my breath,' How did that oaf beat me here?'
Suddenly Dave spun round and stared meancingly at me.
'You, Boy!', he hissed, 'You shouldn't be here!'
'Neither should you!', I answered
'This is the cellar of the Dirty Duck Pub', he said, before a realising grin spread across his fat face, 'You thought this was some hidden crib!'
'No', I murmerd, feeling pretty silly now.
'Sadie! You won;t Adam and Eve it!' He shouted up.
I paniced and sprinted back up the stairs, listerning to Dave's booming laughter from downstairs. Finally I was back in the hallway.

[driver190]

Habbo name: driver190
Habbox name: driver190
My entry:

After all my searching I finally found the hidden Crib. It had been in the Hallway all this time, I reached around to open the door and peered through. What I saw was somewhat unpleasant. There were tramps lieing all over the place, moaning and groaning. Their had eagle eyes staring at me, reading my mind. They made me feel uncomfortable and most defiently, UNWANTED! I took a step back and slowly closed the door. But suddenly a flying foot hit me in the head. All I remember then is being back at home tucked up in bed.

[rockstar6]

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[Guns,]

Habbo Name: Gun,
Habbox Name: Gun,

After all my searching I finally found the hidden Crib. It had been in the Hallway all this time, I reached around to open the door. My outstrectched hand clenched the brass sentimental door handle and with cold shivers of adrenaline I anxiously opened the Murky Concealed door. The door appeared camoflauged behind remains of battered torn wallpaper and the paintwork had become weathered and started to erode. The Door handle was tarnished and rusty and had strange Egyptian hieroglyphics engraved underneath the mounds of brass. I stepped inside the room, It was cold dark and surrounded with old oriental furniture which hadn't been used for generations, cob webs and dust infested the room I started to walk around nervously terrified and shocked. I rubbed my hand over a antique chipped collectable table and slowly rubbed away at the thick mounds of heavy dust which covered it's scratched unstable surface. Suddenly my vision made contact with strong glares of dimly lit lights shining unexpectly through the gaping crack underneath another sentimental concealed door. My heart started to race rapidly pounding Irritabley at my chest and my lips tightly became pursed together
I became distrought and shocked at everything that my blurred vision managed to come into contact with.
Picking myself up off the murky damp carpet which felt disfigured , deformed and smelt disgusting and was deteriating underneath my hollow footsteps I walked towards
the darkness of the shadowed door. My fingers began to tremble and shivers ran horrificly down the depths of my spine I reached out to grab the sturdy door handle
and twisted rapidly opening it as the hinges creaked and tightened against the weight of my push my vision appeared to focus on a large figure blending into the camoflauged darkness, The figure appeared to be stood underneath the brightness of a candle light with flicked uneasily at the clothed cloaked anonymous figure. And then the figure took down it's shabby black faded hood and revealed it's Identity. The figure appeared to be 8Sierk8 the Habbox site owner......... To be continued.

[Drinkheliumuk]

After all my searching I finally found the hidden Crib. It had been in the Hallway all this time, I reached around to open the door to look for that awesome prize of 20 habbo gold blocks. I poked my head round the corner, and saw a shadow. Damn it! I thought, Someones got their before me... I quickly jumped inside, but no one was there...

"Lol! It must have been the shadow from the gold bricks!" i spoke out loud, feeling a bit foolish.

" No Advertisers...." A voice said in the corner.

"What?! I'm not advertising" I said, confused, "Wheres my prize?"

"NO ADVERTISERS"

"???" I was stuck outside in the hallway.
" I've been kicked!" I said in disbelief "No-ones gonna kick me for no reason!" I strode back inside again.

But now there was more than one person. There was one in every avaliable space all covered in black except for suspicous red blobs....

"Why did u kick me for?" I demanded.

"No advertisers...." The leader said getting out a long and sharp knife.

"Huh is that a piece of new habbo furni....."

SLICE! The leader smiled an evil smile holding on to the severed head.

"You are a winner....." >

Habbo name- drinkheliumuk
Habbox name- drinkheliumuk

[caseymc123]

habbo name - calrules10
habbox name- caseymc123

"After all my searching I finally found the hidden Crib. It had been in the Hallway all this time, I reached around to open the door..."
But bang the door sprung open and lost_witness was guarding it. I had no chance now, so i decided to use my incredible brain power to trick him. I
told him there was a habbo in trouble at BT's casino. He lapped it up and went over there . As i got into the crib a man jumped out with a gun, and said let get this party started.

But the party wasn't getting started, because i hadn't sold my 195 rubber ducks . Suddenly BANG and the dirt is gone.