committing suicide

[omgDAN!]

this poem is about people who just run away or commit suicide to get rid of all their problems, and what they feel.
Tell me what you think as it is one of my first.
-slit slit-


I sit in the room, all alone.
Go outside, smiley faces.
I can’t smile, don’t wanna smile.
Confused, hurt, in pain.

Walk to the edge of the world.
Should I jump? What if I jump?
Leave a note… just leave it all?
No-one else can feel the pain.

I jump… crying… waiting…
Where will I go?
What will they think?
Left them all behind.

[Ezzie.]

That's really good, short but sharp +rep

[,Jess,]

That's really good

[omgDAN!]

Thanks

[le harry]

Effective Poem

[Breakfloor]

Really cool.

[chaos-man2006]

great little poem there!