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    This is a an original design of a laptop which I produced in paint!

    Please rate this out of 10!!!!! :eusa_danc
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    tbh; its quite poor. Sorry to be harsh but its true.
    I'd give it a 4/10.

    Try and make it 3d. You don't get completely flat laptops; add a bit of depth.
    Also, the area with the keys is too small, and too far up. It needs to be bigger.
    The keypad also needs to be a bit bigger and maybe add something on the screen? Make it more interesting.

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    It's pretty flat, esp. the keyboard
    The colours are a bit bland too.
    5/10.
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    I agree with them, sorry, and also the keyboard is a bit small, I'm using a laptop right now.

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    Too flat not enough detail.

    Only way you could improve it is by adding more material to the screen or making it wider

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    Not the best I've seen... 3/10.

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