letter to a lost love.

[Zample]

for the record, my sweet
it never was done.
you left me too early,
we werent over with our fun.


and for the record, my love,
i still love you so.
no matter what they say,
i will never let you go.


and for the last time, my dear,
i just wanted to say..
i love you now, i loved you then,
and i love you more every day.


before i go, my shining star,
you're unlike anyone other.
and so with this bullet i admit,
we arent, and never will be, over.








for the record, no. i am not used to writing poetry. excuse me if i am rusty.
i just got bored and started writing random poems, and i actually kinda liked this one.
dunno if you might've. feedback would be appreciated
:3 -amateur-

[luke-p]

I don't get it really, I think it lacks emotion and touching stuff... I was expecting stuff like 'Without you I R Gray pie' 'With you I R Rainbowcookie' And stuff like that :]

[FlyingJesus]

That first stanza is about sex yeah?

[Zample]

That first stanza is about sex yeah?

mm oh baby you read my mind.