how can i carry it on

[Saosin]

I'm not trying to be funny.

[Fishermaaan]

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[velocity]

urm, firstly you need to have a 'dive in action' sequence. so you dont bore the reader stupid after the first chapter. twists and a page turning climax is always good, try keeping more of a secret from the reader, with heart racing emotions. then an ending thats sure to either give a message, show a few tears or give a nice heartwarming ending. depends what atmosphere & emotions you want to use.

[Fishermaaan]

yeah im gna build up the story to william trying to find out who this man is, and as he does, he remembers things he sees from his past, and it relates to his dream, and the end ill say that it was his father, which would leave the reader in shock.