Paul Saw Everything (HW Peice i did)

[Nemo]

Dude, that was freckin' amazing. But needs speech like ''yo giys'' said the man.

Brilliant description though, maybe make a big story?

thanks :] but i didnt really wanna add speech, it would complicate. I wanted to focus on his feelings ^^. Look at my speaking all proffesional lol. I tried writing a story but am stuck for ideas and how to actually start it lol.

[Fez]

thanks :] but i didnt really wanna add speech, it would complicate. I wanted to focus on his feelings ^^. Look at my speaking all proffesional lol. I tried writing a story but am stuck for ideas and how to actually start it lol.

I could help, I'm good with drawing a basic outline but I never seem to finish anything.

[Nemo]

Gimme some good ideas then!!! Pm me em or post em in spam beb.

[PaulMacC]

Im Paul

You could have left it on a cliff hanger like.

Paul said he saw, he saw ....

[Nemo]

Im Paul

You could have left it on a cliff hanger like.

Paul said he saw, he saw ....

We had to finish it though, no cliffhangers

[Aces]

Wow, that's just great.. Wish i'd written that lol.

[le harry]

Yah its good

(Didnt read it)

lol .