Kevin,
Ok, I think people are giving you a bit of a hard time. I'm guessing your recently new to design as the coding is not 'advanced', but still it work's in my browser, therefore it is coded correctly.
There are a few small thing's which would improve the site hugely.
1) Pick a nice 'universal' font. It is important it is a standard XP font otherwise people who do not have the font installed on their computer will just see the text in ugly Times New Roman or Arial. A good font for habbo fansites would be Verdana or Tahoma; as for on images, Volter Goldfish (with a 1px stroke in photoshop for a real habbo effect). At the moment, all I am seeing is the classic 'Times New Roman' font, and its shouting to me 'poor effort'.
2) Know your color scheme! The color scheme is the FIRST thing everyone will see and it will determine what their initial thought of your website is. Your site screams 'messy' to me. Greens, blues, oranges, yellows -- No!! Try a combination of blue's with maybe some light green.
2 color combination = ease of viewing
4 color combination = messy (unless done correctly)
3) Jazz up the content. Anyone can write some text in an iframe, it requires NO skill. Make your content unique, add some color, some justification (central in some places), some font-style (bold, italics), and above all add some images in there. Your 'UltraStaff Needed' graphic is good, more of that in the content and your well on your way to producing a good fansite.
4) The idea! This is the important bit for every fansite. What is going to make your site unique? Why would people choose to visit you over another site? Think of an idea, something unique to you! Ok, so people will more than likely copy it. But this is the point at which people will talk about UltraHabbo... 'Wait, UltraHabbo made that'. Trust me, making your site unique will make those hit's rise in the thousands!
SUMMARY
A very good attempt of a fansite, I like the general template as it does show skill. Take in the advice given and just make your site more 'unique'!
Good effort Kevin, don't give up!
Hope this review help's!


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