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    Default Lies, Lies, Lies

    You’re the one that makes me calm
    You’re the one that causes myself harm
    You’re the one that’s always on my mind
    You’re the one that is always so kind
    When I found out that you were a lie
    That’s when I started to cry
    Now you really do cause me harm,
    And makes me feel, anything but calm
    When I think of you my heart breaks inside
    Just because you lied.


    Now I try to stand up tall
    You’re the one that made me feel so small
    That’s why you always see me cry
    You made me feel like I could fly
    I look around for a friend who can help me land
    And someone that can only attempt to understand
    But when I make the message it can never send
    I can’t send it, not even to my friend
    I don’t want to be hurt again, and lose my pride
    Just because you lied.


    4 Years from the day and I have got someone new
    Someone I can trust, someone that isn’t you
    Even though it will never be the same
    Because I cant have my first love again
    But, you can stand seeing me happy again
    So all I can say is go get a pen
    Write this down and read it and try to confide
    ‘Its all my fault, I’m the one that lied’

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    really like it... can tell you but alot of effort into it.

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    it didn't take that long and its true from my heart cuz tht was the situation i was going through a while ago

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    Nice poem but the 2nd line sounds too emo.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Elliott View Post
    Nice poem but the 2nd line sounds too emo.
    its suppos to

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    Thats brilliantly written. Sorry to herar how it came around.

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    I'm not into the emo thing so thats the only bit I don't like and I seen you did rhyming likes every other line but on a few it doesn't seem to rhyme..

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