Alpine Heights [Public Room]

[@xP]

thats is very very good.

i realy like it wd. :8

[brodeo]

Thanks for the comments.

[Sodom]

Yeah, I'm with Bio, 8/10. It has good tile placement but it's mostly chops from other scenes, which is still okay. It needs more of your own stuff though. +rep.

[StripedTiger]

wow i love this alt snowstorm is my fav game hehe

+rep

[brodeo]

Thanks for the comments.

[:alteration]

**** all these noobs saying "9/10" or "crappy" what the ****?!?!?!

This is so good, if it was in habbo i wouldn't even notice it wasn't made by habbo!!!!!!! you rock!!!!!!!! keep on truckin :-)

:alteration

+REP +REP +REP

[Alkaz]

I really like it but i feel a bit more height could be added to it and like a pine forest or soemthing?

[=Jen=]

I have NO clue what Alpine Heights is.
BUT.
It's very nice.
10/10 and rep, dear.

[Calisse]

you can tell alot of effort was put in, so thats a great start, alot of effort is always something i look for and appreciate...

+ I love the little coats, they work, you can tell what theyre meant to be, and they work from all the shown angles. love them.

+ i like the little machine thing, i dunno what it is, but i like it :]

+ the snow splats on the wall are awesome (but where are they coming from, no ones throwing snow (although two people look like they are about to) and wouldnt they of melted otherwise?

+ love the way snow builds up against walls.

thoughts for improvement...

the guy with his head buried, when you first look at it im thinking *wth is happening?* so maybe make it shaded so it looks like theres a lump, its flat at the moment so it looks like he has no head, do you see what i mean?

the logs, i think they should be thicker, just my personal opinion, thinkin of it logically theyre about the same pixel width as a habbo arm in your alt, log = arm in real life wouldnt be thick enough to store for winter.

the wooden bridges, add another colour in the wood pattern i think would make it look better.

the snow on the roof is good, but on first impression you dont realise its the roof, you think your looking behind the building. perhaps put a chimney up, that would be seasonal :]

trees, perhaps have some of them have tiny bits of greenery showing? I also think, like the bridges, they should have a third colour for shading. the dark on the underside of the trees should have another slightly darker colour, i think.

the little guy bottom left, i dont know what hes doing, it would be really cool if he had a slice of silver on the bottom of his shoe, to make it look like hes skating...

the patch of ice for skating is too formulated, remove some of the lines and perhaps put a skater on it.




generally i think its awesome, and give it a 7/10 x

[brodeo]

you can tell alot of effort was put in, so thats a great start, alot of effort is always something i look for and appreciate...

thoughts for improvement...

1. the guy with his head buried, when you first look at it im thinking *wth is happening?* so maybe make it shaded so it looks like theres a lump, its flat at the moment so it looks like he has no head, do you see what i mean?

2. the logs, i think they should be thicker, just my personal opinion, thinkin of it logically theyre about the same pixel width as a habbo arm in your alt, log = arm in real life wouldnt be thick enough to store for winter.

3. the wooden bridges, add another colour in the wood pattern i think would make it look better.

4. the snow on the roof is good, but on first impression you dont realise its the roof, you think your looking behind the building. perhaps put a chimney up, that would be seasonal :]

5. trees, perhaps have some of them have tiny bits of greenery showing? I also think, like the bridges, they should have a third colour for shading. the dark on the underside of the trees should have another slightly darker colour, i think.

6. the little guy bottom left, i dont know what hes doing, it would be really cool if he had a slice of silver on the bottom of his shoe, to make it look like hes skating...

1. Copied from Snowstorm.
2. Copied from Picnic Area.
3. Copied from Snowstorm.
4. I think there is a chimney.
5. Again, copied from Snowstorm.
6. Just my Habbo.

Cheerss x