[2nd Alt] Habbo Bus™

[Yux]

It's nice, look at the Hotel Views for Habbo Style glass, http://www.habborator.org/hotels/

Maybe look at a real bus and add in detail from that

[Kallot]

Habbos hotel views have nice glass effects, i use MS Paint so everything is quite hard.

the wheels are too big n not habbo-ish,

0/10

Wheel was C+P'd from Inner Habbo Infobus.

:rolleyes:

Habbos hotel views have nice glass effects, i use MS Paint so everything is quite hard.

I use MS paint. Try search the forum for my work, or here:

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z...k3Personal.gif

[Kallot]

Boonz i mean glass effects, there are certain programs which make glass transparent easily.

Also, wheels we're edited slightly.

+ Its only my 2nd alt

0/10 - No effort whatsoever, probably little squiggles and saved as JPEG.
1/10 - Similar to 0/10 - Hardly any effort, maybe just a recolored all one colour habbo...
2/10 - possible a poorly shaded maybe isometric box. Maybe many pixel errors, maybe poor quality (JPEG)
3/10 - A bit better, the object is taking shape and maybe minor attempts at shading, but still hundreds of errors and mistakes - or all C+P.
4/10 - Shading makes a breakthrough here - but a lot of errors/poor detail and/or lack of imagination/effort.
5/10 - Your alt is Satisfactory. It isn't brilliant, but it's isometric (if needed) it's the right shape too. Harsh colours/pixel errors/stolen or C+P is common here too.
6/10 - The alteration now counts as good. It has nice colours to it, less C+P (although if pulled off C+P can look superb) and good shading.
7/10 - A nice alteration - Good detail, nice colours, brilliant idea/well pulled off. C+P can be used still to pull of good alterations
8/10 - Very Good Alteration - Nice detail, superb choice of colours, shaded well, more then a box, maybe complex shapes too.
9/10 - Amazing alteration - Brilliant detail, looks nice on the eye, perfect shading (but maybe a pixel error ;o)
10/10 - worthy of the status "elite". This alteration is flawless!

Wouldnt this make my alt erm.. 5/10 or 6/10? Just wondering because its your system.

So dont quote saying its 0/10.

[PaulMacC]

I like it, it's unique.
for that Im giving you
6.5/10

[Kallot]

Thanks

[Echo54321]

Because of my post, Which SAYS EVERYTHING YOU NEED TO IMPROVE THAT IS PRETTY GOOD CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM, HE GAVE ME A - REP!, IF EVERYONE JUST SED YH ITS GREAT, YOU WOULD CARRY ON MAKING SH1T ONES LIKE THAT

[Kallot]

I did not give you a -Rep as i have 0 rep power, how can i give a red rep with no rep power... also you pointlessly -Rep'd me which should be punished.

think before you post.

Also what you said:

too simple, more detail, out of shape, sizing is wrong, the winderscreen wipers dont dut it, the wheels are too big n not habbo-ish, headlights are bad, front is just flat, no detail on windows

0/10

Thats more rudeness than constructive critism.

[Sabbath]

:rolleyes:



I use MS paint. Try search the forum for my work, or here:

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z...k3Personal.gif

DONT BE A SHOWOFF!


AND KALLOT THAT IS CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, YOU JUST CANT HANDLE THE TRUTH!

[Sulai]

y hav u said trade mark lol.... trade mark to wht ??