Gay story (no title just yet)

[kasi]

i agree with what mcr says sorry but your 12 and you say your gay? you probly even havnt got first hair on lip and you say your gay ?

but i like the story 10/10 +Rep

and mcr your spelling was good mate the odd mistake but most of us have them

I agree with eamonns and x_mcr_x

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[Angster]

Even if he is only 12, what does it matter? 12-year-olds can still write about that, even if they don't have any experience. Maybe it's something they hope to experience, or maybe it's adding on to what he's going through at the time. It could be just a phase, yes - but what's stopping him from writing about it? Loads of writers, especially professionals, write about things they've never experienced. Do you honestly think authors have done the things they write about in Fiction books, or Science Fiction books? Probably not.

As for the story, I like most of the choice of words. You could probably go into more detail about some of the main parts instead of making it somewhat unsubtle. I especially like the line "I know this is wrong, but it feels so right" because I have felt that way many times. I'm not very open about my sexuality, barely anyone knows. But I am bisexual, and I have received experience. I find myself thinking the exact way that this story narrates it.

If you're planning on writing more, please do post.

I give it a 9/10.

[-=rooty987=-]

I will be writing this story for weeks. I will add more chapters everyday. Please do not try and lecture me on what I think to be my sexuality. I have kissed boys before, yet i have kissed girls. Not that this has anything to do with you.
I didn't want to have a thread like that on a forum, but I cannot control others actions.
This story is here, just to open peoples eyes. Some people say they could not stop reading, thankyou. That means alot.
I may not have had these experiances, but yes, i desire them. This may make some people say, 'Eww' or something along those lines, but this is my decision.
Thankyou fo the rep and reading it. It means alot, as i have never put so much energy into a story before.

Love Dan
xxx

Also, stop saying about my age, so what, maybe because you didn't have 'gay/bi' feelings when you were 12, doesn't mean i am not. I have been having these feelings since i was about 7-8.

[Lozzoling]

OH MY GOD THATS AMAZING,its so addictive,write more-more i tell you!!!
+rep if possible

Lozzo2

EDIT: by the way peeps,i'm 12 and bi so just get out of our private lifes,ok?

[.-Elfy-.]

ppl leave him alone hes doing stuff that he likes to do n gr8 story me liking it so far and so what if hes 12 if hes writing stuff like that! m8 keep going dont let the immature minds of other stop you

[x_mcr_x]

I will be writing this story for weeks. I will add more chapters everyday. Please do not try and lecture me on what I think to be my sexuality. I have kissed boys before, yet i have kissed girls. Not that this has anything to do with you.
I didn't want to have a thread like that on a forum, but I cannot control others actions.
This story is here, just to open peoples eyes. Some people say they could not stop reading, thankyou. That means alot.
I may not have had these experiances, but yes, i desire them. This may make some people say, 'Eww' or something along those lines, but this is my decision.
Thankyou fo the rep and reading it. It means alot, as i have never put so much energy into a story before.

Love Dan
xxx

Also, stop saying about my age, so what, maybe because you didn't have 'gay/bi' feelings when you were 12, doesn't mean i am not. I have been having these feelings since i was about 7-8.

youve had those feeligns at 7? heck you probably didnt know what a relation ship was at that time!

[-=rooty987=-]

youve had those feeligns at 7? heck you probably didnt know what a relation ship was at that time!

I know what a relationship was. And can you shutup. These are my feelings, i also have some other feelings about you, these feelings include, dislike, disgust, annoyance - and some more mild feelings. So, just leave me. You're not welcome in this thread.
Btw people, i added chapter 5!

Love Dan
xxxxxxxxxx

[Roboevil]

Please keep adding, You're very talented for 12, and your story is very gripping. The swearing isn't neccesary and some thing's can ruin the atmosphere of the story but it is very good. It seems strange how you say you have had feeling's like this at 7-8, what seems stranger is that you seem to have found other people at your age, i'm guessing, that have kissed you. I don't know anyone in my school who is gay, I could probably guess, but they would never say.
Everyone says how you shouldn't pin yourself gay untill you have experienced puberty entirely, although I think alot of people know they are gay. Besides, a person who is straight and experiences gay feelings through puberty tend to have just a few, somone who has had no experiences generally end up confused of their sexuality. If you have had sexual feelings towards boys for 4/5 years then I would suspect you are gay, it wouldn't seem natural otherwise.
And people that say to people that say that gay's are icky poo, don't. Realising that gaiety isn't bad, and that you shouldn't care about it and respect it, won't come untill people are mature, and the average person below 14, won't know this.

[jinxii]

That's amazing for a 12 year old. It's also quite explicit, shockingly explicit, refreshingly explicit. The 'fem-trash' (i.e. "women's novels") genre isn't my cup of tea, but it was very emotion provoking. Maybe you don't have to have sexual activity in EVERY chapter though

[Charizard.]

Haha, I loved it, great description, And its nice to see other 12 year olds are ready to risk their profile with something so shocking and expicit. Maybe a little too much "action", But its great otherwise. Very much like real life. All the people that are shocked by this sort of thing are just... Immature. Im glad to see another 12 year old is Mature like me. Keep up the good work!