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    I lay here in my bed,
    writing this poem,
    I look on my thigh,
    give a sigh,
    and I dunno why,
    but theres a hand print there.
    I look on my hands and see bruises.
    I am always crying on the inside,
    and sometimes on the outside.
    Is anybody listining?
    I don’t think so,
    I am so scared,
    drownding out,
    reaching out.
    I am crying out and dying now,
    reaching out and I need some help!!! -Jen
    Jennuh.



    You're an angel, I'm a devil.
    But we'll meet somewhere in between.
    Heaven, hell, or the bedroom.
    I'll take you away from everything...

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    Nice Jen 8/10

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    Thanks, Took me about 45 mins to an hour. My mom freaked out over it tho :s dunno why?? :s
    Jennuh.



    You're an angel, I'm a devil.
    But we'll meet somewhere in between.
    Heaven, hell, or the bedroom.
    I'll take you away from everything...

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    O.o Nice poem..

    Your mum probably freaked out over it because it's like you're hurting a lot.. maybe she thinks/thought you're depressed?

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    Wow, great poem!!
    9/10 Well done Jen

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    Quote Originally Posted by Silent-Wishes
    O.o Nice poem..

    Your mum probably freaked out over it because it's like you're hurting a lot.. maybe she thinks/thought you're depressed?
    Yea I am, a lot, cause I have been thro my "friends" blaming ME for THEM try to kill themselves. :eusa_shhh
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    You're an angel, I'm a devil.
    But we'll meet somewhere in between.
    Heaven, hell, or the bedroom.
    I'll take you away from everything...

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