Yeah, good try anyway.
Put a bit more effort in it and it'll look alright.
Add some black outline, as someone said?
6/10.

Yeah, good try anyway.
Put a bit more effort in it and it'll look alright.
Add some black outline, as someone said?
6/10.
I'll be branded a maniac for speakin' the truth and I'll be murdered as soon as I hit the streets with the proof.
Actually I think the cutout might just fit that outline, it's awkward to get a good idea of space because the two colours are so close though.
It isn't bad for a first draft but it needs more definition, the colour is a little bland and it blends into the background a bit too much but hey, I think it could be amazing with a bit of tweaking here and there. Try a coloured background for maximum contrast and see what you think. Also, get rid of that hideous black outline around the acrylic piece and maybe more the cutout shape down a touch, it's not quite evenly spaced.
Right, I think I'm done. I'd be interested in seeing an updated versionDon't forget, our opinions are just that and you don't have to agree with everything we say. Good luck!
Last edited by NarielUK; 29-05-2008 at 12:14 PM.
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Looks like a habbos been painted over in a dark green then the same pasted on top in a different colour
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