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    Default The Love for the sun

    I sit there tight
    As I just might see you
    Slight chance of that...
    Locked away like this
    Never heard a knock
    In my little brown box...
    In Darkness
    With you been harmless
    All I want to do is see you
    But you can't find me here
    Locked away without a care
    No one dares to glares at me
    As they can't see me
    Locked in my box I just want to see you sun the one love I think I have
    But maybe I have been mistaken
    And you’re taken
    Oh Sun please let me see you shine bright
    Like candle light at night.....


    Ok that was about a person been trapped in a box and has never seen the sun but has heard so much arout it he thinks he has love for it but never sees it

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    so the sun is love?

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    Hmmm what do you think ? The poem sorta tells you a small story. tell me your views on what you think is happening in the poem

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