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    Quote Originally Posted by Paragram View Post
    Revised alt with all of the suggestions taken in hand:


    You'll notice the black in the pants is lighter, the waist is slim and goes to bigger to fit the boots, her belly is farther towards the middle, the <<<< arm was smoothened, and the fringe on the hair was fixed.
    Left boot is bigger than the right, pixel error on the right boot, and another at the waist, and the hair still doesnt look quite right

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    what are the supposed errors?
    i know what they are but not what errors would look like
    xP
    i'll make the boot bigger.
    and i might be able to edit the hair a bit.
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    Woooo Leela!

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    Pretty good, work on the eye a bit more though.
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    Thats a Huge step up from those last alts All i can point out really is, No shading on the arms the handle on the gun is 2D nd the neck of the boots is 2D, and a little pixel error round the right boob were you removed the arm.

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    Yer quite a lot of shading is missing. Yer hair needs improving too. wd though.

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    new partially major update version:



    Thanks to HELPER-Ghost who gave me some great shading tips
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    Lol thats pretty good 8/10

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    In my opinion, the shading on the ponytail needs to have more pixel detail like the actual hair on her head. Round it more, like the actual picture you're working from. It's too straight when it comes out of the ponytail; to make it more natural, curve it more. Hope this critcsm helped.

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    i love it

    good job

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