Should I?

[Calabrian]

What dont you like about it.

this is going to sound so harsh
but
literally everything

Sorry im hard to please so ignore my low score

[.Zi]

OK, fair enough. Everybody is intitled to an opinion. How could I improve it?

[Jebbo.]

i dont realy like it either, its the colours i dont like the most. but well done for trying

[.Zi]

What colours should I use instead then?

[Meti]

Image doesn't work for me

[Pazza]

it's not too ba,d it has a nice concept.

Try alligning it all , so it looks tidier. Then bringing the thickness of the lines down, make the font sharp as someone said and try around with colours, and posible gradients

+rep because I like the idea