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    Default [HabWrecked] The Beach Party



    I started making this back in 2007, i quit Habbo, came back and finished it while Tiki was in the catalogue, Haynar held a party there which was great but i still want to improve it, i'm gonna start by taking out the to imps on the left and probaly move the toilets there and take out the cola machine, i will have to rebuild the whole thing to do this though.

    Any comments will be great, cheers

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    add more to sand, looks very dull atm...

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    I really like it

    However, is there no way the you could change the portaloos to come infront of the lodge corner :S

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    I really like some of it but the big sand bit in the middle it a bit too boring at the moment make the sea bit bigger and also make it less square make some of the sands over lap the rugs making it look more realistic. Perhaps put some more tables and deck chairs scattered around, paying attention to detail will pay off.

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    I'd say take away so sand and make the water bend round it like an island, it would look cooler.

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    Thanks for the replys, i'm going to move the bird and add another table, i'm not sure about the shore yet. You think i should replace the sand in the middle with matching sand?

    and no you can't with the portaloos

    cheers x

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    Add more sea and fish, the rest is really good =]

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    Yeah make more of a shore.

    Try changing the wallpaper to the clouds one? Or have solid windows all the way around.

    It looks far too sparse at the moment, but it really does have the signs of a good room, just looks too empty.

    'Cause you've used a large V9 design, you really need to cram the stuff in and as Jake says, you need to pay attention to detail cause detail is whats seen in the larger rooms.

    The centre looks fantastic, as does the hotel (?) at the back.
    Also, get rid of the windows!!

    Look forward to seeing it complete.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Louis-Fox View Post
    Thanks for the replys, i'm going to move the bird and add another table, i'm not sure about the shore yet. You think i should replace the sand in the middle with matching sand?

    and no you can't with the portaloos

    cheers x
    If you raise them by 1 z-shelf (or even maybe a coin), then this will place them infront of the lodge corner, though you will have a gap between the bottom of the portaloo and the floor.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Louis-Fox View Post


    I started making this back in 2007, i quit Habbo, came back and finished it while Tiki was in the catalogue, Haynar held a party there which was great but i still want to improve it, i'm gonna start by taking out the to imps on the left and probaly move the toilets there and take out the cola machine, i will have to rebuild the whole thing to do this though.

    Any comments will be great, cheers
    Nice room it looks cool.
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