The life of a rich villain noob

[ideabox]

The life of a rich villain n00b!
You know, one day I was a n00b to this game. You would be straight to the adoption as soon as you were on the game. I was poor. I had no credits and no furni. Though I was soon adopted, No-one would want to adopt me at all! I was adopted by tomdavil a villain to the whole of habbo. He had loads of web-sites but most of them were scam web-sites. “Alright there Evelo, you don’t look to well. You owned?” he questioned. He didn’t say ‘adopted’ really. It was just as if I was a slave on habbo. Cleaning things up. “No sir, I’m not, I want to be though.” I said quietly. “Well, son your now officially adopted by me” he anounsed. I felt relieved from what I heard. I always wanted to be adopted on habbo. I would have to follow billy203 to the play rooms. It wasn’t nice either. It had pizza boxes everywhere, empty cans and bottles. We would watch the portable television for a while without a cushiony mode or pink sofa. Then we would play catch with the cans and cut our self’s on them. It was hard to stay out of trouble. Anyway tomdavil said “add me boy and search my name. Then go to room tomdavils hidden files.” I was so exited that I did that straight away.
I stepped into the room and couldn’t believe my eyes. I saw the rarest expensive furni you could emagon. I saw a dino egg and watched it for hours. Then he went to his desk which was next to his throne sofas. He had four throne sofas in all. Over the top of his desk was his orange parasol to keep the sun rays off his work. I would spin it for fun. Then I would admire his Basket ball trophie and he would tell me how he got it. But something wasn’t right at all. I saw in the corner a snow globe which was only out to hobbas and staff members. I began to realise that I was ‘owned’ by a dodgy snippers limit. This is what he calls scammers and stealers that sell knocked off furni! “Right now Evelo I’m head of the royal casino of London. I want you to advertise my casino or you’ll be stolen from. And trust me, if you stitch me up... the boys will find you and delete your account.got it?” demanded tomdavil.i nodded at him and went to other rare casinos and invited people to come. I was normally kicked from the casinos for advertising but not all. Soon I went to the casino and it worked. “Right Evelo if you still want to live on the life of habbo, I want you to steal the peoples furni by the dice masters. Ill give you a mini room for yourself and you steal the furni people offer you. If it’s a mocha master or a golden trophy ask for double if they’ve got more, then go out the room. Put the furni down in my spare room and come back.” He explained. I had no choice so I did what he told. I through up running away but I quickly realised that he had me on his heart sticky notes. “Hey Evelo ill bet my Russian samovar and my petal patch for dice number three” he asked. Then he traded him for his stuff, but as soon as he accepted the trade I went to his room quick and placed the stuff down. I also realised that tomdavil had told the bodyguards to kick him every time he came in the casino. I was then upset on what id done. I went back and did the very same. This time a spiky haired man wearing black clothes said to his girl friend “sweet heart, im gonna win you double in this game, hey kid, how’s my best two spyro eggs, my Crusoes hammock and my tubmaster? I replied “yes sir, but what number good sir?”.”Mmmm ill go for num four” he said. I took his furni and the security made sure he never came in again. I went to tomdavil and said”ummm sir can I take a break please?”

This story is yet unfinished but rate this post high please and thank-you for reading.
Please post back your opinons towards this story.
The next part of this story will be coming out before habboween with some other storys to scare you! so be prepared for
HABBOWEEN!

[iRoss]

put it this way... id like to hear the rest!!!

[tbh imo no m8]

put it this way... id like to hear the rest!!!

omg same here that was awsome you should become a habbox writer

[ideabox]

Thanks guys.
I wish i was that talented to going onto habbox writing/scripting. I can make scripts in no time!

[Da-Weasel]

OMG
I SOOO WANT TO HEAR DA REST!!
U SHUD MAKE A BOOK!!
WOW!!

[Simonac55]

Wow! Really good story! I am really impressed by your story. Write some more in the future because you're a great writter!

[ideabox]

Thanks folks but dont worry there will be more storys coming on halloween or should I say habboween?
So build up your patience there!

[smurf-you]

Good story it's a handfull though, Maybe put paragraphs init...

[ideabox]

Yes I should but that day I was a bit tired and It was a long time ago. I did this story inthe summer term.

[*.Glitter.Rip.*]

Great story Ideabox! Wow you are amazing! 10/10
Keep them going.