[Rk] - Just Married _ Sp September

[Volumise]

love it

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[Rollerkingdom]

Ahh I've been away from this thread for too long!!

The chapel is a million times better, but now it's more on the edge of the cliff; it needs to be more of a slope rather than vertical steps lol. It doesn't need to be so high up either, it's too squashed into the corner of the image. I'd lower the platform about half way, then slope it down from the door.

Now that the hair has darkened you can't see the detail as well which is a shame. I think the hair was fine before.

I prefer the grass as it is now (the lighter version, as it was originally).

The shadow under the characters was fine before, it's too dark now.

So altogether I'd; put the hair back, put the shadow back and make the chapel more accessible to the disabled and then the whole alteration will be perfect .

Can you show me which hair you liked the most from the previous update cauz on my pc the brightness of the hairs look the same is so hard to know which one you are saying.. Ill bring back their shadow to normal too but about the chapel idk it's really a pain in that place you know working with perspective and it's been my first time doing it.. i think it's good and i would like to keep it for now maybe next time whenever i use perspective ill try to do it better >_<

+ i would like to thanks everyone

[Rollerkingdom]

Updated:

•Brought the shade under habbos back but added the pattern on it but darker since it's under the shade
•Fixed hair
•Fixed the staircase area of the church

[Rollerkingdom]

sorry for the triple post but id like to say that i am checking it now on my sis imac where the brightness is better and the shade under the habbos are still darker..
so i am fixing it.. + ill try to get that lightning source of the hair lower..

[Suspective]

This certainly for winner. Well done

[Black_Apalachi]

That's the hair I meant, although the highlights you've added to the darker hair look good too .

The shadow under them would probably be best a tiny bit darker than it is here as well.

The church steps also look better in this one but it's fine really - it's not the main subject of the image.

Good luck!

[Rollerkingdom]

That's the hair I meant, although the highlights you've added to the darker hair look good too .

The shadow under them would probably be best a tiny bit darker than it is here as well.

The church steps also look better in this one but it's fine really - it's not the main subject of the image.

Good luck!

Yah i am sticking with the hair i did above but make the highlights a bit darker.. they are showing too much..

The shade under the habbos ill change.. and the stair steps ill have to keep the one i did above because the one you posted above this post had a different angle for the church...

[Rollerkingdom]

Better?

[Black_Apalachi]

Yeah, I wouldn't mess with it much more now .

[Rollerkingdom]

alright thanks everyone for their help
+rep for the ones that helped.