Song i made up

[Circadia]

i made up a song called with you but i need to make it a bit longer heres the lyrics:

I see you walking down the hall,
i wonder what your doing.
I see you next to me,
but we broke up months before.

Well,
i see you, i feel you,
next to me.
I need you, i want you,
but i don't know why.

What is this feeling i am so confused,
I need to know what you want me for.
But it heals me, being with you.
What can i do,
cause all i want is to be with you

I don't want this feeling anymore,
please come back to me once more.
Your body close to me feels so right!
'Cause i need you through the night.

'Cause i see you, i feel you,
next to me.
I need you, i want you,
once more.

But what is this feeling,
i am so confused.
I need to know what you want me for.
But what is this feeling,
i am so confused
I need to know what you want me for,
What can i do.
Ohh,
What can i do.
Yeahh,
What can i do,
Cause all i want is to be with,
Youuuu.

Thats the lyrics and here is the song
http://www.supload.com/sound_confirm...1158055990.wav

[AlexOC]

Its Beautiful.

Keep going..

[Circadia]

ty realised carnt give u rep SORRY FOR DOUBLE POSTING I KEEP DOING IT !!

[samantha421]

Nice

[Circadia]

ty +Rep

[crazed]

Pritty darn sweet, keep going with this, and I'm sure it could be amazing

[Circadia]

Pritty darn sweet, keep going with this, and I'm sure it could be amazing

ty +rep nd i sorta dunno what to write next

[Wig44.]

It doesn't really sound like you're actually singing, an ok try I guess.

[Randomme]

I sang it, it was lovely

[Circadia]

ty +rep if u can suggest eny changes wud be grateful