New story/novel I want to write

[kuzkasate]

I wouldn't bother trying to get a book published at the age of eleven as your vocabulary is no where near wide enough, or interesting enough

Or you could always keep on editing it over the years as your vocabulary expands... but that'll take some time (h)

[Wig44.]

It's good to have a very rough plan, but I prefer to let things formulate as I write and never make a cast iron plan at the start! Also, don't be afraid to delete half of the story if you feel it isn't going where you had hoped or the quality isn't up to scratch.

[Gibs960]

I was thinkin that, I hate writin like that, I change it too much, so its pointless me writin or thinkin of a definitive plan.

[Cheryl]

just wondering what the name of the book you had published was

[Gibs960]

It was one that was short stories, a couple of us had a go, only a few got through You wouldn't be able to find it, only available in North West and it'd even be hard to find in North West

[sammy]

There are a huge amount of Vampire Romance novels out there nowadays.

Don't want to be negative, but that genre is extremely over-used at the moment. Also your plot is very complicated and to be honest i don't understand the majority of it.

[Tenbeta]

It was one that was short stories, a couple of us had a go, only a few got through You wouldn't be able to find it, only available in North West and it'd even be hard to find in North West

Yes there was something like that which I was published in here in Wales For a poetry competition.. "Young Writers - I have a dream" for South East Wales.

[Gibs960]

Yeah, it was like that

[Haaaaarry1]

There are a huge amount of Vampire Romance novels out there nowadays.

Don't want to be negative, but that genre is extremely over-used at the moment. Also your plot is very complicated and to be honest i don't understand the majority of it.

couldn't agree more really

as soon as i read the first line of your plot i just thought of twilight straight away with the vampire-human love thing. and i know you are all saying theres loads of others like that, but i dont really know the others that well. seeing your twilight sig as well, it might come across to people that you are sort of copying it. even though the plot does sound quite interesting, i don't think it would be something that i would personally be interested in, but it could grow into something if you write it well. good luck

[HotelUser]

I have to say it does sound quite a bit like Twilight. You'd have to add many attributes to the characters and plot which make make your story differentiate from the Twilight series.