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This is my first alt. I'm not good at shading yet so please forgive the top bit
It was supposed to be entered for the competition but I changed my mind
Any ways I could improve?
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My first alt
Last edited by Volumise; 02-05-2010 at 11:01 PM.
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03-05-2010, 11:03 AM #2
It looks nice for a first!
I would say, with the hair, use a lighter colour than pure black to show off the definition/shading in the hair,
With the top thing, if you want it all to look like one top then I would suggest you remove the lines which single out the top part of the top and continue the shading down the rest of it (if that makes sense) and use similar colours that make it all flow together?
For example, (hope you don't mind):
Last edited by Con; 03-05-2010 at 11:06 AM.
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I quite like it, but I suggest trying what above said.
Other than that, good job.
I'm burnin' up for you baby.
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03-05-2010, 02:06 PM #4
I really like it. I love the style of the hair but as said above maybe make it a little lighter to show off the shading better.
Nice work
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I see what you mean about the top shading and I don't mind at all.
Originally Posted by Reality
It looks nice for a first!
I would say, with the hair, use a lighter colour than pure black to show off the definition/shading in the hair,
With the top thing, if you want it all to look like one top then I would suggest you remove the lines which single out the top part of the top and continue the shading down the rest of it (if that makes sense) and use similar colours that make it all flow together?
For example, (hope you don't mind):
Thanks for the advice + help!
Thanks Originally Posted by Meree.
I quite like it, but I suggest trying what above said.
Other than that, good job.!
Yeah i'll try using a lighter colour now to improve on it, thanks Originally Posted by Nicola
I really like it. I love the style of the hair but as said above maybe make it a little lighter to show off the shading better.
Nice work!
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Wow, that's excellent for your first! Take note of what Reality said and you'll soon be on the way to being a superstar!
drink up this bottle of yeah
and P A I N T your body on me
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Thanks and will do Originally Posted by Myke
Wow, that's excellent for your first! Take note of what Reality said and you'll soon be on the way to being a superstar!!
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