1st attempt at making a pool

[RandomManJay]

I laughed at this when I made it and it looks like a paddling pool for a 2 year old, but tell me what you think /10:


(Link:http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/9...bbopool7fx.png)

[AndieJohanny]

That's not bad at all :d Just one thing is, where the guy is standing, on that side of the pool you shouldn't be able to see complete squares on the bottom. You wouldn't be able to see a little bit of them next to the wall of the pool because of the depth and perspective from where your looking at it. I'm finding this hard to explain :s Also the water should make some kind of outline around the guy's body.

[RandomManJay]

lol,I understand but still it is a first attept and it does look like a paddlings pool so not that much depth.

[Axlilxbitxflirt]

Not Bad!!! 8 + Rep

[Andsew]

very nice. many people do alts like this but i think yours is good. 8/10

[Cheeseboy76]

Looks like a paddling pool for a two year old
7/10

[pompey.pig]

all i want to know is how did you do that and i give it a 7/10 its does look alittle like a paddling pool but its soooooooooo clever

[Drewar]

Excellent alt! 9/10! I love your alts, keep making them!

Just one thing about this one, it looks like he is standing in an empty pool and his legs were frost bitten and turned blue or something, again, I'm standing with my 9/10 Great job

[Yayse]

the water should make some kind of outline around the guy's body.

yup ^^ tis true, maybe some ripples or something, at the moment it looks like he has green legs "/ lol good job apart from that ;']

[RandomManJay]

I tried making ripples but they looked sad and poo.