GREAT NEWS!

[lawrawrrr]

Note before reading this post: I'm an aspiring author. Been writing for years now!

now the post.
I GOT A POEM PUBLISHED, IN A PROPER BOOK AND EVERYTHING! YAY!

If you want to read it, pm

[buttons]

congrats!
what is was it about? can't you post it here?

[Jamesy]

Thats cool! I had one of mine published in a book waay back in middle school - I read it back the other day and it's not very good . I think you should post yours though, as lovely as PMing you sounds

[Zak]

Well done, must be a proud moment! In a book and everything, wow.. well done

[Deak]

Congratulations & get it posted on here please

[lawrawrrr]

I'll post it here as long as people don't flame me - i've had bad experiences elsewhere :L


The Phoenix
A shifting beat of molten wings,
A haunting call that slowly rings,
A click of metal against stone,
A beast of flame perched on its throne.
Eyes shine of ruby desire,
Looking out across the mire,
Wings alight dry the murky mud,
As temptation dares to flood.
A shadow creeps behind the form,
Moving closer and getting warm,
A winding net is raised above,
Its target a small gift for love.
Wings flail as the spirit cries,
Web tangled and unable to rise,
Though the flames could scorch the ropes,
The beast is caught from long past hopes.
Once caught and never free,
Was how the phoenix was made to be,
Exploding in a fiery flash,
Never dying as it returns from ash.

[Deak]

Thats a good poem, i liked it

Well done you

[tylermunjkt]

Wow! Well done, Great Poem! +Rep!

[Judas]

thats a really nice poem you should apply for article writer!

[Jessicrawrr]

aw that's a real cute poem ;D