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    Default My new zombie run entrance.

    I recently decided to convert my TC into a zombie run and this is the first room i've done.

    I have some wired hidden behind the iron maiden, and people have to go the whole way around to que i just have the red laser next to entrance for quick entrances/looks.

    All comments good and bad are appreciated , i'd like to know where i can improve.

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    It's really good except I'm not a fan of the ambers.

    My other constructive criticism is I don't think that you should have the host teleport there as it blocks an area of the queue.
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    wow, i really really like that!
    The mist on the petal patches looks really good, as does using pumpkins as a divider.

    The things i dont quite like is how there is just one lodge wall or whatever it is, I think it might look better with all trees. Having said that I dont know how a teleport would look against the trees, it looks good with the lodge wall thing
    Also the ambers dont really look very good in that room, stick to pumpkins

    9/10 overall!
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    That looks really cute and I like how all the colours blend together and don't clash

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    Thanks for the comments guys

    I'll replace the ambers with pumpkins and see how that looks. I think the iron maiden is fine there as a queue is unlikely to go back that far, however i'll try and find another place for the iron maiden, maybe in the center of the hosts area.

    I meant for those lodge walls to look like the outside to a cabin as the next room is a haunted cabin , maybe if i extended the lodge wall/moved it to the left it would look better.
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    i like most of it... 9/10
    but the front row with the ambers and drink and red lasers ruin it for me. also the red laser right of the door tele. just have a staff entrance or get a red laser by the room entrance.

    rep+ for an overall original room design though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Eoin247 View Post
    I meant for those lodge walls to look like the outside to a cabin as the next room is a haunted cabin , maybe if i extended the lodge wall/moved it to the left it would look better.
    Yeah I guessed that you wanted to achieve something like that, but it just doesnt look right to me, i dont know why :/
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    I like it. Personally I love the ambers, they fit in well with the theme. :]
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    I really like the theming and it looks like a good game room, which I'd certainly visit!
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    The concept of the room is good, and I know you have the petals to look richer (just like we all do in rooms).

    However, in a Zombie Run I honestly think that spooky, dark green grass would be better!


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