For a first attempt it's not bad mate, i'd give it a 5/10.

For a first attempt it's not bad mate, i'd give it a 5/10.
Bonjour, la noirceur, mon vieil ami
Je suis venu te reparler
Car une vision piétinante doucement
A laissé ses graines lorsque je dormais
Et la vision
Qui était plantée dans mon cerveau
Demeure toujours
Parmi le son du silence
It is good for your first try but maybe use some habbo fonts instead of the normal ones in paint as it would stand out more. It is basic but I don't expect it to be brilliant for your first try and if you pick up on what others have said then it will be better. 7/10 in my opinion as it is your first try![]()
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