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[AgnesIO]

Just a sort of moan, but not moan I guess.

Sorry to the news reporter who posted this, but it was linked on the forum, so obviously it will be the one I point out.
I bold is used too much in the article, it sort of takes away the emphasis of the bits that actually should be in bold. Also, a few spelling/grammar mistakes can be found - which I know the reporters may be relatively young but it could still be improved on. Also, parts of the article are not entirely accurate/confirmed.

Anyway, not really a moan, just came up as I saw it - more of things to improve really.

https://habbox.com/#/News/article/345

[Chippiewill]

Eurghghghhghg random bold spam burns my eyes. People who think bold spam looks cool are ******ed btw. It'd be much nicer if you used tags and autolinked articles.

[tylermunjkt]

The bold bits are the bits what I think are important. If there is a problem with that, speak to Nuxty. As thats what he has told me to do.

// Also, I'm not the strongest in the department so dont expect EVERYTHING just right and perfect...

[Aidenn]

Personally i like how its written few mistakes as mentioned however sorry to say this tyler my friend.

but personally i dont think 'a big bit of wood' is important

Great article non the less, it seems Bin Laden was killed in a similar nature to Harold Godwinson, Harold with an arrow, Bin laden with a bullet.

[AgnesIO]

The bold bits are the bits what I think are important. If there is a problem with that, speak to Nuxty. As thats what he has told me to do.

I don't disagree with bolding bits, I just think too many parts are bolded, which as I say, takes emphasis away in my opinion. I am not targeting you by the way, it is just that you posted the thread on here with a link, so obviously it came to attention. You are not the only one to 'rape the bold tool'

[tylermunjkt]

I admitt there are some mistakes, but we all make mistakes so ya'know. Also the mistakes are not minor. Also when I wrote it I was trying to talk to my mother and sorting out my brother...

[AgnesIO]

I admitt there are some mistakes, but we all make mistakes so ya'know. Also the mistakes are not minor. Also when I wrote it I was trying to talk to my mother and sorting out my brother...

You don't need to make excuses, Tyler.

At the end of the day the mistakes could be corrected by simply checking through it. However, I don't want to insult you or anything - since your articles are still good - and so are all the other reporters.

You were just unfortunate in that yours was the first I saw!

[Chippiewill]

Perhaps a limit of bolded words per paragraph should be enforced?

[Narnat,]

very fair point but whatever tyler thinks is important will be different to what you feel is important. Lets remember they aren't professional so these things are expected and I think that what has been said is rather valid. Everyone has to learn and to learn you need to make mistakes.

[Jordan]

A limit of bold words in unnecessary, It's only a minor problem and now he knows for future use!