[Haley] The Schoolbus

[Haley]

This is my first alteration, it took me an hour. There are a lot of line issues. Example: the lines
go diagonal too much or too little etc. The house is poorly shaded, I'm going to need time with that but I am tired so I decided to post it now to see the criticism I get.

Rate or Hate?

[Kasabian]

As you said, the lines are the main issue here. The diagonal lines should be like this;



Like you said the shading needs work, although the different colours used on the bus is good.

[dbgtz]

In additions to the lines as shown above, the grass has no shading either. I think you tried too much without understanding much about shading and nothing about the isometric view point, try a small alt and just do more over time.

[Haley]

In additions to the lines as shown above, the grass has no shading either. I think you tried too much without understanding much about shading and nothing about the isometric view point, try a small alt and just do more over time.

I have a lot of small alts on my computer. Whether it's a terrier with a bow tie. A zombie. A house. etc. I got bored with doing all those so I tried this. So basically it's not my "first alt" but my "first scene"

[geo]

It's quite nice, but I think it needs to be shaded a lot more.

[Sharon]

The grass needs a lot of work, but I really like it! Hope you post the finished result.

[Liam]

I like the magic wand/sunflower.. that's about it - 3/10.

[Maatt.]

I like the bag.. ;3
The rest is just the lines and the shading, NICE TRY!
REP

[Haley]

Thanks, Matt. Also that little thing in the grass Is a wand.

[Aaron]

Ooh, that looks good!