Xmas Greetings Card

[j0rd]

I like it I guess, you shouldn't really post it though, someone could claim it as their own!

[twinart]

I like it I guess, you shouldn't really post it though, someone could claim it as their own!

If they did, might the staff won't choose theirs because I sent it first.

---------- Post added 04-12-2011 at 07:19 AM ----------

Thanks for all of your feedbacks, guys.
Most comments I received is "The hotel side (left) is bigger". Actually I made 530/2 but fails, nvm.
I'll improve my GFX works in the future!

[Jurv]

It's quite a simple alteration, nothing too complicated but it does look alright. There's a few things that I would change though, first of all the fonts really don't look right. The font in the centre of the ribbons doesn't fit in with the theme at all and it seems a bit too big and pixelated. The second font at the bottom of the card isn't too bad. I wouldn't have used a white outline like that though, it doesn't fit in with the background image of the card. Another thing which I would change would be the christmas lights at the top of the page, I think that they're too close to the outline of the card. I would bring them down a little so one of them weren't touching the edge.

It's a nice attempt, good luck with the competition.

[Nick]

Im not to keen on the big stroked text + the text down the bottom with the white stroke.

[Rainbow]

It looks really nice although one side of the card looks bigger than the other side and they is a darker line on the left side!