Assassins Creed Ezio [First ALT]

[dbgtz]

The shading in his face is probably a bit... excessive, I don't think it needs so many colours. Then also where the good goes in, surely the shadow go further down his face at that point? I am assuming the light is coming from an upward direction. The shoulders just seem point, whereas it looks like (from the ref picture) that it's meant to be some sort of shoulder guards on top of his shoulders, you need to make it look more seperate and make the should more rounded. I didn't bother commenting on some other features as I assume a lack of space meant that you couldn't fit some features in .

[Qzaki]

The shading in his face is probably a bit... excessive, I don't think it needs so many colours. Then also where the good goes in, surely the shadow go further down his face at that point? I am assuming the light is coming from an upward direction. The shoulders just seem point, whereas it looks like (from the ref picture) that it's meant to be some sort of shoulder guards on top of his shoulders, you need to make it look more seperate and make the should more rounded. I didn't bother commenting on some other features as I assume a lack of space meant that you couldn't fit some features in .

Rounded sholders made look a bit separate
Shadow on his face i think is exactly how it should be being a hardcore AC fan his eyes are never shown but his nose and mouth usually are
and the face shading is his tash

And yeah its hard to add a lot of detail due to lack of space

[dbgtz]

Rounded sholders made look a bit separate
Shadow on his face i think is exactly how it should be being a hardcore AC fan his eyes are never shown but his nose and mouth usually are
and the face shading is his tash

And yeah its hard to add a lot of detail due to lack of space

Yeah but it's not rounded right, needs to more of an oval/semicircle sorta thing. Also it isn't really, it will be done how the light is and the light on this means that it should not be like that. Also the shadow I never said make it lighter, but I don't think you need 4 different shades for the skin.

[Qzaki]

Yeah but it's not rounded right, needs to more of an oval/semicircle sorta thing. Also it isn't really, it will be done how the light is and the light on this means that it should not be like that. Also the shadow I never said make it lighter, but I don't think you need 4 different shades for the skin.

I didn't do the skin.. its one of habbo's skin tones so its done how it should be

[Qzaki]

Maybe you could enlighten me with you great skills and show me what it should look like?

[Samantha]

[@]@Qzaki[/@] or you could make a copy of it and edit that, see if it looks any better with some things edited.

I just think it looks a bit flat overall, could just be my eyesight though lmao.

[Rainbow]

That looks really nice

[Chris]

The face doesn't look right, too many colours. The body looks really good though, well done!

[Qzaki]

Heh thanks, I'll maybe edit it in a few days or so. doing other stuff atm.

However I'm very pleased with that being my first alt