How can i improve this??

[Bef]

I think its a laptop lol.

[2hd.]

Yep its a laptop, i was never proud of it, i might even remove it =\ and thanks for your views.

[poll]

i really like it ill add rep when you improve it a bit the lines inbetween the walls and the floors dont join just silly things like that will improove it alot lol but nice job :eusa_danc

[popppy3000]

keep it put it on nd ill try nd fix it for u kk