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  1. #151
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    I would probably give Alkaz a 7/10. Due to the fact I couldn't even understand the first sentence. However, after I saw the corrent usage of the points of elipsis, I upgrade him to a 10!

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    4/10. 'Corrent' should be Current. 'Upgrade' should be Upgraded, but still good spelling & grammar Josh

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    There isn't much need for a full stop after 'current', a comma would have sufficed or the word 'and'. Also, there is a slight pause after we say 'but still' so the last comma should have gone after that phrase and not after 'upgraded' and you forgot to put a period at the end of the sentence. Still, perfect marks for spelling but your grammar lets it down a bit, so I will give you a seven out of ten.

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    Ten out of Ten because I couldn't pick up any mistakes from the sentence.
    anyway


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    7/10, I don't see why you put a capital T on the second ten?
    God said, let there be light.

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    my speling is grate

    oh and your grammar (i know picky lol) is uh.... bad cuz you put a t as capital in the middle of a sentence tut tut .

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    Instant 0.

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    10/10, I have no reasoning behind my scoring.

    'On top of the world, on top of it all,
    trying to feel invincible.'


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    10/10!
    Good grammar, and spelling is good.

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    0/10 coz i suc @ spelin'

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