Story- 'Bullying' Chapter 1

[allykin]

lol i had myn at 7 but it wuz only for emergency n evrytin n to play games n
maybe sneak textin ;p

[ChloeDust]

Boro, you say you're 13 and you got your phone three years ago, that makes you 10, wow 1 year older than 9, big difference? o.O;;

Anyways back on topic, yeh good story i can't wait to read more =]

[allykin]

thnx i myt post chapter 2 in a min.

[xhannx]

Please, do!

[allykin]

Chapter 2: Will she believe me?

As Emma was thinking hard, she had a lightbulb flash on her head, and she decided to go to Katie's house and say to her what happened, and to believe her because that's what bffl was. But then on second hands she still might be mad with her. But Emma done the right thing and went to her house, she walked to her house which was round the block. She looked up and saw Katie's window and saw Macey, Nikki and Katie having pillow fight with really buff boys Emma had always fancied! Emma felt she couldn't talk to her at this time. But she had to she wanted to. She pressed the doorbell, and Macey looked out the window, Katie said i'll go get that, but Macey said it's my phone it always does that when i have a text, but of course she was lieing.

Emma knew this was a bad time so she went home. She waited till tomorrow to sort things out, so at school the next day she went to Katie and said Hi Katie. Katie said back off loser and kissed her boyfriend Leo.
Emma was angry, mad and annoyed of how Katie blew her off like that.
The truth is Emma doesn't know macey and nikki are using Katie, to get revenge on Emma.

You see, 4years ago when they were 5 years old in reception.
Emma used to bully Macey & Nikki because they were fat.
But until year 3 they lost weight and there skinnier then Emma now in year 5.

After school she knew Katie goes other way to Macey & Nikki, so when Katie was walking on her own home. She went up to her and said Katie wait up!
and Katie stopped and said what do you want! Emma said look please, i overheard them talking the other day in the hallway how to get revenge on me, and you were the only way to get revenge, Katie you have to listen there not your friends there users! I beg you please just go back to how things were normal! Katie then says look i have a boyfriend and loads of popular mates that's all i wanted and maybe you shouldn't of bullied them in reception, now you know how it feels!
Emma says look i was 5years old i didn't know why i did it.
Katie- well now it's there turn
Emma- they've been doing it since year 3!
Katie- Just leave me alone.

Emma started to cry.
But then a idea came right in her head how to get her best friend Katie back.

Make sure you tune into tomorrow for episode 3 of Emma's Revenge

[xhannx]

Damn yoo =P Tell the whole story!

[allykin]

i fort it wud be gd to end der
but ders moreeeeee

[xhannx]

But its TOMORROW
I can't wait til then ='(

[RedStratocas]

You should proof read before you post, a lot of things didnt make any sense at all. Just a few things I noticed:

1. Why does a 9 year old have a cell phone? Im 15 and dont have one and dont need one. The majority of teens today dont need a cell phone other than to have one because they are popular. I doubt a 9 year old would need one at all. Most 9 year olds dont need a bag either
2. I dont think a cell phone sounds anything like a doorbell, or no where near loud enough.
3. Theyre 9! How "buff" can the boys be? And how many 9 year olds have relationships?
4. No one says "Im going to be popular". No popular people say that they are popular. If anyone says they are popular, they arent. Popular is a state of mind.
5. Why can't Emma just let Katie be? It isnt the law that if you are friends once, you will always be friends and one cant find other friends. Emma is still a bully if she cant let someone have friends, weather they are using eachother or not.
6. Boys dont simply go up to girls and punch them in the face for no reason at all, at any age. If the kids are that immature to do that, they are too immature for a cellphone.
7. It doesnt seem like Katie is being harmed by this. She might be being used, but how is this bad in her view? She has new friends, a boyfriend, and is popular, and she didnt have to do anything.
8. Is it even possible for girls at that age to call someone and say "Want to be my friend?" and the person is immediatly popular?

[Crouch]

Erm Boro, its one year of a difference, so keep on subject and stop being awkward