Going..Going..Gothic.

[Embean]

I think this is a bit steriotypical. "Goths" as you put them don't go and pick on year 7's. And don't steal money. I am, as you put it, a "goth" and find it a bit offensive that you think all goths are trouble makers...
Nice title though. I might nick it for a song... :p

I'm not saying all goths are like that, its just that, these pick on people.
Rofl, thanks anyway

[Embean]

Chapter: Plan In Action.

'Okay, but, there's cameras all over my house Jake! How am I going to get past them, without them seeing me getting my mums money from her purse!?'
'Hmmm, well, how about, I distract the 'camera guy' who keeps watch, and you grab the money.' He replied to her while looking down out the window. 'Omg, thats a great idea, thanks Jake!' She said as she kissed him on the cheek. Jake scratched his neck and looked down at the bed, 'Um, yeah I - I gotta go, see ya.' 'Oh, well, bye' She said as he walked out of the room.
The next day they both began their plan. Jake walked into the cameras offices upstairs in the house. 'Um, hey there' he said as he walked up closer to the security guy. 'So, i'm Daisy's mate, I wondered if you would teach me some stuff about how to control the..um, cameras! Yeah - uh, thats it!' He trembled. 'The security guy swallowed the last piece of his sandwich, 'Now why would you wanna learn about that kid?' He said still chewing on a little piece of ham in his mouth. 'I um, i'm took up media, and, we're doing about... controling cameras..' He replied, as he scratched the back of his neck. 'Well.. 'Daisy's friend..' He said. 'I'll have to turn of the cameras to show you..' Has this happened, he turned of all the mini T.V'S that linked to every camera in the house. Daisy crept into her mums room and grabbed for her purse, she dashed out and went into her own bedroom. 'Uh, thanks for that, tour of the cameras!' Jake thanked the security guy, as Jake dashed out to Daisy's bedroom. 'Well, have you got it?' Jake asked her impatiently. 'Well duh!' She replied with a little smirk on her face. Jake loved the way she grinned, she had little dimples at the side of her face when she did, and she looked so sweet and cute. Jake smiled at her, then he came back to reality, 'So, urh, when you gonna get the bass?' He asked quickly. 'When the shop opens, not often you see shops open at 11pm!' She replied as she looked over to her clock at the side of her bed. 'Umm, do you wanna come to my house?' He asked her nervously. 'When?' She replied with her normal little smirk on her face. 'Tonight, my mum and dad have gone out to the bar tonight and they won't be back till late, my sisters at home and my cousin.' He told her. 'Okay sure.' She said bouncing on her bed.

-Next chapter.
-Today.

[Emicat]

Cameras? You have a very crazy imagination...
How rich are they?
And they even hired someone to run them?
Unbelievable!
Whoops, a pig just flew into my window....

Lmao

Nice story anyway.

[Embean]

Cameras? You have a very crazy imagination...
How rich are they?
And they even hired someone to run them?
Unbelievable!
Whoops, a pig just flew into my window....

Lmao

Nice story anyway.

Very rich.
ROFL.
I like my imagination.. it's.. creative x]

[Embean]

Next chapter:

The next day, Daisy walked down to Jake's house, it wasn't that far away, so she decided to walk instead. When she arrived, she knocked on the door, she could hear music coming from Jake's room, so she knocked harder and louder. 'SH**!' She screeched just as his sister opened the door. Daisy hates Jake's sister, she has long light brown hair, and likes the same music as Daisy, only that she one hell of a brat, she tries to get you into trouble for anything, and basically she hates her. She's only 14, but she still can get her into trouble. She stromed past his sister without saying a word to her, and bumped up the stairs. She knocked on the door to Jake's room, and he opened the door with his guitar still in his hand. 'Hey' he said to her giving her a grin. 'Hiya' she replied to him, with her little smirk. She went in and sat on his bed, 'What you playing on your guitar?' She asked him looking down at a stack full of songs piled ontop of each other. 'Nothing really i'm just playing a few tunes.' He said to her. He picked up one of the papers from the pile, and handed it to her. She read the lyrics to it, and he started playing the tune to it on his guitar. When it was time for dinner, they all went down to the dining room. On their way down the stairs, they both passed his sister again, Melanie. She gave Daisy a glare and she walked into her room, slamming her door behind her. 'What's her problem?' She asked Jake, 'Dunno, just born that way.' He giggled, they both laughed.

-Next chaper
- Today or tomorrow.

[Addie]

Hmm.. Good again. 10/10

[SHEEPY]

Your stories are appalling, please stop.

[Addie]

Your stories are appalling, please stop.

How are they? I love her stories.

[Embean]

Your stories are appalling, please stop.

So, maybe to you, but i'm not going to let a noob like you ruin the fun for other people, maybe you don't and some other people don't like my stories, but I don't right them for ignorant people like you. Thanks Spork for posting btw x

[Addie]

So, maybe to you, but i'm not going to let a noob like you ruin the fun for other people, maybe you don't and some other people don't like my stories, but I don't right them for ignorant people like you. Thanks Spork for posting btw x

Yvvw Btw Emm? Ive done more chapters of My story Lily .