OMG! WHAT A MENTAL PERSOn!

OMG! WHAT A MENTAL PERSOn!
Originally Posted by spikes007
lol yeah u got a really good storyTy. I did next chapter.
Chapter 5:
Smack! We both hit the ground on my last vision i saw my mum getting up. "Time To Teach You A Lesson" Said my power crazed mum. "ARGH" I screamed i was tied down in a car. Outside the car was my mum all i saw was Her, Hilga And A Crobar. She hit Hilga with a crobar then drove me away furiously. "You stupid cow" I Roared. "You, Me And The River Are Having A Little Date" She whispered. I knew exactly what she meant. We approached the river she rev'ed the car. This Was It My Life Was Over. She drove foward at 95 mph. SQEEEEEEEEEEK! She braked the car on the edge i forgot something. She drove back picked up Hilga who was bleeding like mad and laid her next to the river. She rolled the car back "Here is a lesson for you little miss perfect" She Screamed "When you mess with me you mess with death" She put all the windows and locked all the doors. She drove foward towards Hilga and the river. "Hilga I Love You" I Cried
Chapter 6 Tomorrow
What a mad woman! Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :rolleyes:
-Gets out blunt spoon ready for poking-Originally Posted by spikes007
sorry thats all for todayure story Rocks
-Pokes- Plsssssssss do more
Chapter 6:
Smash! What was this my mum got out of the car Hilga was sitting in front of her growling. She was a magic dog. Hilga jumped up onto Jane's face and started to scratch and bite it. My mum fell into the river Hilga jumped into the car and unstraped me by biting the ropes. I started up car and reversed. Jane was starting to get out of the river I then spun around and drove away. In mirror i saw she hi-jacked a car and started to chase us. At that point i heard her scream "You Stupid B****". Her car hit mine and i skidded off the road. She got out of her stolen car, grabbed my hair and hit it off the car bonet. "Let Her Go" shouted my dad who put Jane at gunpoint. My mum walked towards him slowly and grabbed the gun. Bang!Bang!Bang! She shot my dad three times. Bang! "OMG! You Killed Hilga" I Roared. Then i lost it. A stranger would of thought i was possessed i grabbed the gun and kept hitting her. Then shot her 12 times in the head.
As I Write This Now I Am In An Asylum. No-one Believes My Story But Now I Must Go BANG!
The End
By Ben(Spikes007)
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