Propergander Industries... [WIP]

[Revis]

I think it's the right size, it's just gonna have to be a huge boat.

Better, or worse?

Another update.

[King-Jark]

yeah, hat looks much better, cept now the watter marks... i dunno know about so many...

[Revis]

Yeah, i'll delete them when I'm finished if there is too many.

[Roboevil]

The waves aren't parallel to the back walls, I know they don't have to be, but it doesn't look right. Unless, wchich you should do anyway, add an extra lighter tone to the sea for more realism. Also, as it's a cross-section, you should add depth to the sea on the edge. I'm not too keen on the stern is it? The front of the boat, that dark grey line on top of the egde thing of it, it's hard to describe, it looks strange and n00by, like when people shade by adding a dark line around the whole object, and then a lighter one, and a lighter one after that, if you get me o.0. Other than that, it's just little details that I'm sure you'll add in later anyway. Good though, wouldn't expect such intricacy from you.

[Revis]

I added the third wall to finish the cross-section, I might add a huge lock as the 4th wall to box it in which should also block the front of the ship from view. The grey line around the black on the boat should be a rail and I actually like that effect on this.

[Roboevil]

The grey line around the black on the boat should be a rail and I actually like that effect on this.

Oh, you could raise it slightly? Or make it seem railed by adding like 1 pixel per every 2 along, it'll make it look spiked if you know?

[pechie100]

hmm
good so far

[Revis]

Oh, you could raise it slightly? Or make it seem railed by adding like 1 pixel per every 2 along, it'll make it look spiked if you know?

Yeah, i'll try some stuff out when I next work on it, I don't have much time over the next week...

[Kasabian]

- Train should be Bigger
- Should see the bottom of the boat & sub in the water(I know it's hard but is has to be done.

On the whole, 7/10 so far

- Stealth

[Jay™]

Its going on well, the only thing i will point out is that it isnt very proportional, the freight train is nearly bigger then the buildings, so is the sumbarine.
8/10