Ma Public Room

[ItsDave]

Get rid of that thick black line near the entrance and there's a pixel error on the bar. Everythings been 2 sqaured except one which makes it go up a little bit. 6/10

[LoverRule]

Thats a pretty nice alt, also its good you've said that you did get pieces from other public rooms The bar looks a little too square, maybe needs to be a little more rounded? :s Well, also the trees kinda look like theyre growing from the water But 7/10 Keep it up!

[:Dazza]

B-e-a-utiful

[Mxrt]

B-e-a-utiful

Can we get an ambulance for this girl? I don't care if I sound rude that is horrible. All you've done is copy and paste - apart from on the bar - which has the world's population's amount of pixel errors!

I'm sorry but you can do way better. Redo it all.

1/10 for effort.

[Faye]

erm it looks better now uve fixed the bar but there are still some errors like other people have pointed out.Try and make the trees stand up so we can see the bottom of them instead of them disapearing-if that makes sense
but good try and good idea 5/10 for now