[ The Beginning - Gay Story >.< [Made up] ]

[Craig]

Yeah but I type like proper fast and I can use punctuation properly. Here's what to get sorted:
Random capital letters
Random ....'s
The punctuation in speech
Having spaces either side of commas

[Mr.Sam]

Yeah but I type like proper fast and I can use punctuation properly. Here's what to get sorted:
Random capital letters
Random ....'s
The punctuation in speech
Having spaces either side of commas

or just use word to correct grammer and or spelling errors

[Chaz]

Spell check?

[Mr.Sam]

Spell check?

hense why i said use word

i see you edited your signature

[dani342us]

Not Good. I dont like it. The story makes the sence. It has no point,-its pointless- Also, your grammar isnt so good. I'm young, no older than sixteen and im not so bad.

[PrittyKittyKuty]

grammar! sheesh!! its the story yoor reading who CARES about the grammar!!! grammar helps but it doesn't mean a stories lousy because of it..

[FlyingJesus]

Nothing's explained.. ever. Who's Sarah? You only mention their ages and situations in reply to people's questions, you need to include lots more detail and such so people can tell what's happening without having to ask, and like people have said, spellcheck is nice, makes things easier to read.

[H.bubbly]

just drop it , i was bored. i know its crap , i don't really care because nothing in life perfect...


someone CLOSE the thread , its well old.

[FlyingJesus]

i don't really care because nothing in life perfect...

I am.

[.Lynn]

The grammars bad.. yeah try using spell check.

The story is sorta coming along..