Things to improve on:
The shadow of the person walking should be cleaned up and not all messy.
The road should have some texture, you put texture on the sidewalk but not the road.
Lol and the kids arms are too short.

Things to improve on:
The shadow of the person walking should be cleaned up and not all messy.
The road should have some texture, you put texture on the sidewalk but not the road.
Lol and the kids arms are too short.
I'm going to rate it purely on the good things I see, the Grass' texture is magnificently put together, as is the path, I like the benches but the baby does look a bit, different. Good so far though. 8/10.
im fixing the shadows right now.
I am an ordinary person with ordinary...SUPERPOWERS!
Gravity doesn't care who you fall for...
oo thts pretty good a few errors on the kids arm and the choc box's wrapping looks a bit....eskew apart from tht id say well done!Originally Posted by Mystic-Son
Latest version still work in progress!
C+C and rate -/10.
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