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    well done dante.
    Liking it so far

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    If you are having trouble with the skateboards why not go to the habbox dress up game. Get a skateboard there and modify it up a bit. Or you could use that one for a little rough guide or somthing

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    I'm not much of a skater but that is alright, maybe add some more things, like that thing you "grind on." 8/10 +repage.
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    The skateboard is very tilted and you need to add more shading.

    RATING: 7/10

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    -The ramp needs to be alot smoother, atm the edges look very jagged.
    -Also the ramp needs shading, with it getting lighter towards the bend and then darker again as it smooths out onto the flat.
    -The boards are too small, length and width wise. They need to be about the width of a Habbo shoe, and the length on a habbos shoulder, before curving upwards at the nose and the tail. The ends are also too square.
    -There are alot of errors on the wood effect on the top of the ramp. Perhaps you could also add some texture to it aswell?

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    hus dante lol

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    A rail
    v nice so far
    Musicicon is
    currently

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    Dont like the skateboards or the big ramp, its abit out of shape. Not too keen on any of it really sorry, 6/10
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    Yer thats pretty Cool . Just If the Guy on the halfpipe Dropped in He wuld stack cus it goes from curvy to strait .

    And the guy doing the trick looks abit stiff with hands beside him Try move them . Othaz Are already been said .

    Erm yer that cool . 7/10
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    more shading is needed on the ramps
    and the skateboards need work

    apart from that i like it 7/10
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    Other than some messy lines, and the skateboards, it's really great! Good job, and keep editing it. I can't wait to see the finished product!

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