Not bad, but you could improve:
The guy grinding the rail has the position all wrong and hardly any area of his feet are on the board.
The lines on the ramp are not nescessary, or even drawn in perspective to the edges.
The people on the top of the ramp have no shading, neither does the ramp in the top right.
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Thread: (WIP) Skatepark V5
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Shut up you kockey fool! I think he has great skills.
Originally Posted by MrPresident
Last edited by Crimson; 12-07-2006 at 07:22 PM.
No more dreaming of the dead as the death itself was undone
No more crawling like a crow for a boy, for a body in the garden
No more dreaming like a girl so in love, so long
No more dreaming like a girl so in love, so long
Dreaming like a girl so in love with the wrong world.
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i agree with crimson shut up we have our rite to our own oppinions and dont diss the opinions of others *** i sound like a stupid mod
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I'm not that stupid. :rolleyes:
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10/10 Very Nice
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If you can't take constructive criticism, then don't post at all. You should add shading to the ramp to show that it's going down. You should keep the ramp's side isometric instead of messing it up. The camera guy's shadow is in the wrong place. The people on the ramp don't have shadows. Some skateboards dont' have shadows. The side of the paving isn't lighter on one side. cba write anything else. 6.5/10
Last edited by Wootzeh; 12-07-2006 at 08:00 PM.
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cool nice work
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Also, the ramp is completely the wrong shape.
It starts off curved than it just goes straight?
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